The second thing i had to do for my preliminary task was to design a contents page.

I think the general layout of the contents page worked and i also think how pictures were scattered around the page with no real structure worked as well. The bold headings were easier to see from the rest of the page, which was the idea so to entice the reader into looking at a particular story. The headings are straight to the point as to give the reader enough insight into the story as to want them to read on. I think the humour makes it informal and friendly.

I think to make the magazine look better it would obviously need colour and to have bolder writing. You can see the lines i used to write on and there are no pictures except for a cartoon picture. The writing in some places is hard to read and therefore would be a turn off for readers.